Spencer Park

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.

• The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
• Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
• A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.

Spencer park

On March the 10th my school went to Spencer Park in Spencerville. I was in group 1A with Mr Scot. But some of us went in a car but the rest of us went on bus. I really wanted to go in a car because my friend were in the car and because buses go slow. I was excited to go to Spencer Park because I had never been there before.

Then we went  Lagoon Walk, Wetlands and Bird hide out to go see the birds and saw lots of them. We saw the birds when we on the Lagoon Walk. We saw lots of spider nest and lots of horses. When we were at the Lagoon Walk, Wetlands and Bird hide out I learnt something that you have to be quiet around the birds.

At the playground I made some new friends named Brianna, Medina and Julia. Then some of us went on the flying foxes, the spider web and a swing. When we were at the playground we saw other schools at Spencer Park.

We went to the beach it was a long walk before we got to the beach. To collect sea shells I collected some seaweed and shells. After we had collected something we had to get in a group of 4  to make a sand castle.I was in a group with Risha, Mikayla and Kea I felt calm about making sand castles.

Lastly, we went to the playground to a have a run around and to play after lunch cause we had been walking for ages and we needed to have fun after all our walking. I was playing on the flying foxes, spider web and the slide. I saw some of my friend there names are Mediana, Brianna and Julia. Mediana and Brianna are from my Softball team and Julia went to camp with me.

Then we had to go back to school, but before we went back to school we had a piece of fruit. I had an apple, Risha had an apple. We had to finish our fruit before we got on the bus because there was no eating or drinking on the bus. I will remember what I learnt today about being quiet around birds so that I don’t scare them.