SEXXXY Paragraph - Hunt for the Wilderpeople

Kia Ora and welcome back to my blog. Today I will be sharing with yous what I have written as my SEXXXY Paragraph about Hunt for the Wilderpeople. My paragraph is about how Ricky changes throughout the film. The highlighted colours of the paragraph stands for something. SEXXXY  

Here is what each colour means.

In Hunt for the Wilderpeople the main character Ricky changes throughout the film. In the film at the start you can see that Ricky was very destructive and doesn't really care about what he's doing. During the movie you can also see that he starts to have a better attitude towards the world and himself. I felt that when Ricky started to be better this made everything a whole lot better for him personally. I think that it was directed like this because Ricky had finally found better people to be and around and had a life to enjoy. Ricky started to get better was when he stayed with Bella and Hec. I think that this also happened because he finally had some positive vibes and positive people around him. In the end Ricky becomes much better to the environment and to himself because he's around people that appreciate him and support him. 

100 word challenge

Kia Ora and welcome back to my blog. Today I will be talking/sharing with you what I did in HR (home room). Today the classes challenge was to do a 100 word challenge about a Polar bear and a man touching a truck. I have written my story and finished it so I will be posting it/sharing it on my blog.

Here is my work:... 

100 Word Challenge 

It was a cold day in the Arctic, I got out of my truck to check what that noise was.
I turned around and saw a polar bear, all I got to say is I was TERRIFIED.
I ducked to the height of my truck so that the bear wouldn’t see me. I stood at
the back of my truck and looked over, as I was looking over the top of the truck
I made eye contact with the bear. I held in my scream and got in my truck. I
waited for the bear to go and drove home.

Thinking Of The Claim!!!

Hi guys, this term we have been looking at DEBATING, and what it is. We had a go with a partner, and it was about 'why schools should wear school uniforms'.

I have been learning how to debate and how to hook people in, and how to make a strong claim.

I have made a claim witch is the start of a debate

Here is my claim...

Intro: Claim

Did you know that  your Muscular systems lets you move. It also powers up some of the of systems in your body. That why I think that the Muscular system is the most fundamental system in your body.

What do you think about my claim is interesting or is it boring, do you like my fact

What do you think about my blog post. Do you know another fact for me, if you do please comment. I will be looking forward for your comment.

The Light

On the 1st of the 5th 2018
I wrote a story about a light with my class. It is a very interesting story about a light and how I became the employee of the year. I have used my imagination to write this story about the light and how I went all the way around the world.

Here is my story.

The Light

At my job, I have one task. Every day I go in, sit at my desk, and wait for a red light to turn on. When it does, I push a button. I repeat this process until the end of my shift. One day, I find out what the button does… I push it and everything freezes. I push it again and everything goes back to how it was. The next day I went to my job and the light did not turn red it turned green, I had never had a green light before. My boss came to my desk and said “CONGRATULATION” you are the employee of the year.

I got a photo taking and the photo got hang on the wall. Ever since then I have luck.

I am now retired and I have had a great career.

I have traveled around the world and learnt different languages like Chinese, Spanish, Samoan, Tongan and Italian. I have enjoyed my life. THE END

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The Cloud Story

W.A.L.T to describe using our senses.

I know I will be successful when I describe what I ..

• See
• Hear
• Feel
• Taste
• Smell

It was a sunny day with the sun shining on the sea there was a friendly cloud. But it was no ordinary friendly  cloud, it was a cloud with it own path. Not the wind blowing it, it was himself taking him into different places. Then he saw himself in a  reflecting  it was like he was delighted to see himself again. I followed him till he got to the traffic light’s. He went to the traffic light and started changing colors like the colors of the traffic light’s.

He was turning green, orange and red it was like he was like it was magical. So I told my mum she thought it was just using my imagination but I think it was not my imagination. So I show all my friends but there mum says the same things.

But then one day the cloud came to my window I told my mum. We both rush back up to my room “See mum I told you there was a cloud.” Suddenly the cloud see some trouble so he race down to where the fire was like a car going full speed. The fire was like red on the sun. So the cloud went down and started to rain water on the fire it was like the cloud was being helpful and caring to help the beautiful environment. I went to him and asked if he could be my friend.

The cloud flew passed my bedroom window like a paper plane. “Hello cloud.”

He mumbles back to me, ”Hello.”

After he had helped my town he went back to his home.  I am going to miss that cloud.

The Day I Went To War

W.A.L.T to describe using our senses.

I know I will be successful when I describe what I ..

• See
• Hear
• Feel
• Taste
• Smell

Last year I made a story for ANZAC day, but I didn't get to publish it so I am publishing it so use can all see it. Here is my story. Please don't forget to leave a Helpful, Positive and Thoughtful comment, Bye!

It was one terrifying day at war, on the 10th of December 1975. “Get ready men. Are you ready for war.” “yes sir” Yelled all the soldiers. So they got off the plane and started running for their lives and their country. I could see some terrifying stuff in the army, people getting shot, notes in the sky, smoke from the tanks, dust and explosions.

I can hear scary, spooky and killing sounds like people fuling to the ground, and soldiers stepping in puddles and soldiers yelling “help help.” Then I could see my big brother Taisyn he was 28 before he went to war. We surprise him with a  birthday every single year because His friend and him were the only ones that survived the war. When the war had finished I smelt Smoke, dried blood and freedom. I smelt freedom because there was 2 of as who survived.

I feel sad, scared and  terrified. My family got killed thats when I became strong and survived the war. When  the war was over the soldiers got back on the plane and went back home. I was glad that I survived war because I mest my family and I wanted to see them it was the day of my birthday the day I came back so they put a birthday party for me.

It was my 29th birthday today in 1940 the 11 of october.

I told my family about the war. They were glad that I was still alive.

THE END

Partly Cloudy

This week we have been working on a story about a cloud. That acts like he is a real human. Here is my story.

One nice calm after noon with the yellow red and orange sun fading down there were black and white birds with stick legs and long necks and  black round eyes were flying past with white bags hooked onto their long yellow beak heading to the city.

One of the birds dived down and put the white bag on the window sill and unwrapped it the lady’s new baby was here and other one delivered a bag with kittens in it and another one delivered a puppy. All the birds have delivered the stuff they went up high in the sky and went to some fluffy clouds but they weren't just any clouds they were fluffy giants!.

The birds landed on the clouds the giant were on after all that a bird that was gray and looked like he just got shot with white thunder. He landed on a gray cloud that was sad when the giant saw sight of the bird and got happy and squeezed the life out of him the gray bird and then made something what he made was a dark green chomping crocodile then wrapped the dark green saw sight of the bird and got happy and squeezed the life out of him the gray bird and then made something what he made was a dark green chomping crocodile then wrapped the dark green crocodile and gave it to the bird the bird looked anxious to grab hold of it.

But he knew he has to do it he Tartuffe up and took it out of it hands and took a deep breath in but the crocodile bit the bird in the head! The bird yelled ‘’OUCH!’’ And flew away mean while he was doing that task the gray cloud looked around and saw all the other white clouds having fun with their birds and making cute things. The gray cloud said .sigh.

The gray bird came back with feathers falling of his gray body the gray cloud picked them up and put them on his head but they fell off. He looked up and saw a white cloud and flew up there the gray clouds heart had just shattered into a million pieces he looked up and saw the white cloud giving the gray bird a white bag. The gray cloud got so mad that he turd to black and white thunder came out then he stopped and cried it was raining under him suddenly the bird came back the cloud stopped but he was sniffing the bird unwrapped the white bag and put on a rugby helmet and a rugby chest plate on the cloud smiled and squeezed the life out  of him.

The Pit Story

W.A.L.T:

I know I will be successful when I can…..

• Write in correct sentences.
• Use paragraphs correctly
• Use adjectives

I made my hands get gripped to the top of the slide. I wonder what would be down there and if I would fall into a pit that goes all the way down into the concrete. I was terrified at first, then I let go of the silky slide.

I held my breath and went down the bone-chilling slide. I thought “I should of stopped by now” “AHHHHHHHHHHH.” After 10 seconds of falling I hit the balls that were in the dark and spooky hole.

I landed on my face, I stood up and touched my soft cheek. I felt my left cheek then my right cheek. On my right cheek there was something weird on it felt like a hard candy. I looked at my cheek. “YUK, GET OFF” I yelled. I put the hard candy in my pocket.

I started to climb. I jumped to another pit, I stopped. There was a plaster sitting at the top of the next soft ball that I was going to grab. It started to fall, it fell on my face. I tried to blow it off but it did not work so I let go off the balls and wiped it off of me. After that I had realized that it was a bad Idea. I had realized that something had saved me. It was the hard candy. I had got it out off my pocket and stuck it into the balls.

I started to climb again. I reached the top and smiled. I still had the hard candy and I did not know what to do with it, so I looked at it. It had some old food on it and a hair that looked like a baby's hair. But guess what I ate it anyway.

My Love Story

W.A.L.T

I know I will be successful when …

• Re-call what is happening in the video.
• Use adjectives and experiment with language features.
• Use paragraphs correctly.
• Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence starters.

I sat at the brown soft piano as my fingers took control of all the memories that I was felling. It was a very emotional time. I was shivering like a leaf as I crumbled. I was broken.

I was playing notes of memories that me and my wife use to play before she past away. She couldn’t be saved she had a terrible tumor cancer there was no cure for a women her age, I was broken with nothing. Then I heard the lovely very beautiful notes of my wife playing the piano. Jenny grabbed my hand and started to play a note with me. My love that was shredded like paper, she kissed me and left like there was nothing more to see.

After that another memories floated by and made my shaking fingers change the tune. I remembered another memory as my eyes started to water. It was my brother he was in war. He looked at me with a big tear, he walked out of the crumbling trench and tried to shot the other group with a shot like lightning, but he got shot in a flash. I felt scared because 2 of my loved ones are gone.

I was scrambled. Then I remembered that I had a wonderful son, his name is Jeremiah. I remembered that I had brought a toy horse for him on his birthday. He loved it his dreams had come true. He put the silky horse down and sat on the warm chair. He finished my sad song with a lovely note, and smiled at me.

My Somalia Story

W.A.L.T...write a narrative through the eyes of one of the crew, or robots or the pirates.

This week we have been writing about Somalia and if we were the captain on the ship or the captain on the ship a crew I chose to be the captain.

It was one sunny day on the shimmering water of Somalia. It was nice and peaceful day until some pirates from another ship came along.

Then my personal assistant heard something that sounded like foot step.

“WHAT WAS THAT!”

“It is the other pirates.”

Nobody knew about it until the pirates went into the kitchen, into the bottom of the ship, and the other captain from the other ship came to me and said

“ Do you know how I am.”

“Who.”

“The new captain!”

Then the crew from the other ship came down to these containers. After that they saw something it looked like robots. The robots helped me. They chucked them over board. One of them said”BOO” and that scared half of them away. Once they had scared all of them away they went back into the container and always keeps them safe

TO BE CONTINUED

W.A.L.T to write a speech about my mystery.

Kia Ora, Good morning ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls. My name is Tasharn and today I am going to talk to use about my mystery. Have you ever heard of Crop Circles?

Do you know what or how Crop Circles are made?

Is it true that Aliens make Crop Circles?

Well  hold your hat’s and strap yourself in, because I am going to solve this mystery for you.

Have you ever thought that Crop Circles were made by aliens?

Have you ever been to a corn field and thought why is this big circle around me?

I believe that crop circles aren't made by aliens they are just a hoax made by humans.

You should believe that crop circles aren't real because aliens aren't real, it is all just a hoax.

Well guess what, I’m going to tell you how I solved this mystery of the Crop Circles because I have evidence to prove it.  

I got all my information of sites and youtube videos. First I want to talk to you about the two men who made crop circles.

Did you know that two men? Doug Bower and Dave Chorley made a plank of wood then tied rope to it then made the corn or wheat go flat. It all started in September 1991 that Dave Chorley and Doug Bower  started to make crop circles. They were making crop circles for 13 years then they owned up to making crop circles and that it was all just a hoax. Now I am going to talk to you about aliens and if they made them.

Some people believe that aliens make crop circles. Some people say that the caught aliens on tape and that they watched them make them. But some say that they hear noises that sound like aliens making them. Next I am going to talk to you about UFO’s and if they made them.

Did you know that people believe that UFO’s make crop circles how silly is that. Crop Circles are not made by UFO’s they were made by humans. But some people believe that they were made by UFO’S and aliens. Then it comes to me to talk about tornado’s and if they made them.

Do you know what a tornado is?

Do you think that crop circles are made by tornados and the way they spin makes them. There was about 5-8 crop circles made by tornados. Is it true that tornadoes made crop circles? Tornadoes, wind gusts and plasma may have accounted for some of the simple circles but these explanations do not hold up when some of the extremely complex designs are viewed and Time to talk about Humans and if they made them.

So do you think that crop circles are made by humans. people believe that they were made by UFO’s, Aliens, Tornadoes and the two men who made are hoaxes.

So now do you think that Crop Circles are made by Aliens, Tornadoes, UFO’s, and the two men Doug Bower and Dave Chorley made them. No it was Humans Doug Bower and Dave Chorley made then with a plank of wood and some rope to push down the stalk of corn down.

This comes to the condition that crop circles are not made by UFO’s, Aliens, Tornados and the two men who made are hoaxes. They are made by Humans Doug Bower and Dave Bower. Mystery solved over and done with.

CandyLand

W.A.L.T write a fantasy

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when it includes…

• A Description of the fantasy world
• A Problem
• A description of how the problem is solved (resolution)
• The journey back to the real world
• A description about how the character feels

The Day I was Still Alive

It was a sunny day on the 3rd of March, with bright blue skies. I was walking home from school that day then all of a sudden there was a storm on a sunny day I thought the weather is playing up again. But it wasn't playing up it was an actual storm coming my way. So then a hole appeared I thought how did a hole appear?

So I looked inside it was dark and spooky. I was about to walk away until my friend purposely pushed me in. I was falling for about 30 minutes before I hit the ground, then splat! I hit the ground. I was asleep for 5 minutes before I got up.

Then went to a sign that said “Welcome to Candyland”.

I said “How did I get here? I remember one of my friends pushed me in the hole and I fell ”.  

Then I heard something it was people shouting like crazy.

So I followed the sound and I saw racing cars lining up at a black and white dots and there were candies on the seats chairing for the races at the lines. “I want to be in this race” I said quietly to myself.” So I went to this that said “Make a car” so I went in after I had asked I picked a car that was a racing car I made it purple with magenta stripes and pink wheels. Then I went to the race track.

We needed a gold coin. I thought “How am I meant to get in the race.  Then I saw something shining in the tree a gold coin I quickly run to the tree and back to my kart. Then there was a problem all the candy was poisonous when I got in my kart. It started coming alive.

I had to quickly finish the race so that it would all go away and so that I could win the cup of gold. So I speed up I went faster and faster closer to the finish line. I was close then it came up with ‘You're the winner!’’

I thought “Have I finished the race?” The poisonous candy died when I went over the finish line. I won the cup and came first place.

But when I passed the line? I went straight back to my real world which was walking home from school.

I felt glad and happy that I got out of the poisonous candies and back home safely. Then when I got home I gave my mum a humongous hug.

“You won't believe what just happened…….”.

THE END