The Day I Went To War

W.A.L.T to describe using our senses.

I know I will be successful when I describe what I ..

• See
• Hear
• Feel
• Taste
• Smell

Last year I made a story for ANZAC day, but I didn't get to publish it so I am publishing it so use can all see it. Here is my story. Please don't forget to leave a Helpful, Positive and Thoughtful comment, Bye!

It was one terrifying day at war, on the 10th of December 1975. “Get ready men. Are you ready for war.” “yes sir” Yelled all the soldiers. So they got off the plane and started running for their lives and their country. I could see some terrifying stuff in the army, people getting shot, notes in the sky, smoke from the tanks, dust and explosions.

I can hear scary, spooky and killing sounds like people fuling to the ground, and soldiers stepping in puddles and soldiers yelling “help help.” Then I could see my big brother Taisyn he was 28 before he went to war. We surprise him with a  birthday every single year because His friend and him were the only ones that survived the war. When the war had finished I smelt Smoke, dried blood and freedom. I smelt freedom because there was 2 of as who survived.

I feel sad, scared and  terrified. My family got killed thats when I became strong and survived the war. When  the war was over the soldiers got back on the plane and went back home. I was glad that I survived war because I mest my family and I wanted to see them it was the day of my birthday the day I came back so they put a birthday party for me.

It was my 29th birthday today in 1940 the 11 of october.

I told my family about the war. They were glad that I was still alive.

THE END