Kia Ora and welcome back to my blog. Today I will be talking/sharing with you what I did in HR (home room). Today the classes challenge was to do a 100 word challenge about a Polar bear and a man touching a truck. I have written my story and finished it so I will be posting it/sharing it on my blog.
Here is my work:...
100 Word Challenge
It was a cold day in the Arctic, I got out of my truck to check what that noise was.
I turned around and saw a polar bear, all I got to say is I was TERRIFIED.
I ducked to the height of my truck so that the bear wouldn’t see me. I stood at
the back of my truck and looked over, as I was looking over the top of the truck
I made eye contact with the bear. I held in my scream and got in my truck. I
waited for the bear to go and drove home.
I turned around and saw a polar bear, all I got to say is I was TERRIFIED.
I ducked to the height of my truck so that the bear wouldn’t see me. I stood at
the back of my truck and looked over, as I was looking over the top of the truck
I made eye contact with the bear. I held in my scream and got in my truck. I
waited for the bear to go and drove home.
Hey Tasharn, Nici here
ReplyDeleteI really like your story it was really interesting my favorite part was when you said you saw a polar and you got terrified, would you act like that in real life? Maybe next time you could tell us more about the main part of the story was. What was your favorite part about writing the story.
I'd love to see your reply
Have a wonderful day
Kind regards
Nici
Hey Nici,
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my blog, My favorite part of the story was when the polar bear came along but there wasn't really a main part.
Thank you for the feedback I will yous that in my next story.