CandyLand

W.A.L.T write a fantasy

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when it includes…

• A Description of the fantasy world
• A Problem
• A description of how the problem is solved (resolution)
• The journey back to the real world
• A description about how the character feels

The Day I was Still Alive

It was a sunny day on the 3rd of March, with bright blue skies. I was walking home from school that day then all of a sudden there was a storm on a sunny day I thought the weather is playing up again. But it wasn't playing up it was an actual storm coming my way. So then a hole appeared I thought how did a hole appear?

So I looked inside it was dark and spooky. I was about to walk away until my friend purposely pushed me in. I was falling for about 30 minutes before I hit the ground, then splat! I hit the ground. I was asleep for 5 minutes before I got up.

Then went to a sign that said “Welcome to Candyland”.

I said “How did I get here? I remember one of my friends pushed me in the hole and I fell ”.  

Then I heard something it was people shouting like crazy.

So I followed the sound and I saw racing cars lining up at a black and white dots and there were candies on the seats chairing for the races at the lines. “I want to be in this race” I said quietly to myself.” So I went to this that said “Make a car” so I went in after I had asked I picked a car that was a racing car I made it purple with magenta stripes and pink wheels. Then I went to the race track.

We needed a gold coin. I thought “How am I meant to get in the race.  Then I saw something shining in the tree a gold coin I quickly run to the tree and back to my kart. Then there was a problem all the candy was poisonous when I got in my kart. It started coming alive.

I had to quickly finish the race so that it would all go away and so that I could win the cup of gold. So I speed up I went faster and faster closer to the finish line. I was close then it came up with ‘You're the winner!’’

I thought “Have I finished the race?” The poisonous candy died when I went over the finish line. I won the cup and came first place.

But when I passed the line? I went straight back to my real world which was walking home from school.

I felt glad and happy that I got out of the poisonous candies and back home safely. Then when I got home I gave my mum a humongous hug.

“You won't believe what just happened…….”.

THE END