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Thursday, May 30, 2019

My 9 Storied Paragraph๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€!

Kia Ora, and welcome back to my blog. Today in class my class had to write down a 6 sentence story about a piece of music that we had to hear and write about. The piece of music sounded like it sounded like it came from a fairy tale, but it actually came from a Christmas Album. 
Here is my 9 sentence story.


It was a bright and sunny day. I decided to take a stroll through the woods and visit my friends. As I walked through the woods I hear the lovely tweeting of the birds in the trees. There tweeting voices makes me feel happy and quite good inside. I keep strolling through the woods and out from a bush came a deer. In that moment I felt nervous because I didn’t know if the deer was going to hurt me or if it was nice. So I walk up closer to the deer so that it know that I am not scared of it and it shouldn’t be scared of me. Once it earned my trust I take the deer with me on my stroll to become best friends. 
THE END.

Here is the song of the music piece.

I only did a 9 sentence story because I had to much detail. 
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