Kia Ora and welcome back to my blog. I will be posting 2 paragraphs about Private and Personal information. I have done a previous document about what you should share online and what you shouldn't.
Here is my work:...
Personal vs Private
What information should be shared?
Only personal information should be shared. Things like where you live and
what your last name is shouldn’t be given out to ANYONE. But things like
your first name and what you like to do in your free-time can be shared
because it isn't as private as where you live.
what your last name is shouldn’t be given out to ANYONE. But things like
your first name and what you like to do in your free-time can be shared
because it isn't as private as where you live.
How can you turn Private information into Personal?
First thing you do take out information that is private and then replace it
with words that make sense in the sentence.
with words that make sense in the sentence.
EXAMPLE: My name is Lexi Rush, and I live at 32 Whitehall Road.
Correct way:
My name is Lexi and I live down Whitehall Road.
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Hello Tasharn,
ReplyDeleteI am glad to read your post about the differences between private and personal statements. You're correct that taking out certain information keeps the statements personal but not private. Good work with your posts this week.