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Friday, August 18, 2017

My Somalia Story


W.A.L.T...write a narrative through the eyes of one of the crew, or robots or the pirates.

This week we have been writing about Somalia and if we were the captain on the ship or the captain on the ship a crew I chose to be the captain.


It was one sunny day on the shimmering water of Somalia. It was nice and peaceful day until some pirates from another ship came along.

Then my personal assistant heard something that sounded like foot step.
“WHAT WAS THAT!”
“It is the other pirates.”
Nobody knew about it until the pirates went into the kitchen, into the bottom of the ship, and the other captain from the other ship came to me and said
“ Do you know how I am.”
“Who.”
“The new captain!”

Then the crew from the other ship came down to these containers. After that they saw something it looked like robots. The robots helped me. They chucked them over board. One of them said”BOO” and that scared half of them away. Once they had scared all of them away they went back into the container and always keeps them safe

TO BE CONTINUED

2 comments:

  1. Hey Tasharn,
    What a great story - I could picture what was happening, that would have been an interesting sight! I wonder why they went in to the kitchen first? Were they hungry? What did the robots look like? Maybe you could add this to your story to make it more descriptive?

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  2. Okay Miss Morgan I will make sure that I add those in next time, and make my work more interesting.

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