Partly Cloudy

This week we have been working on a story about a cloud. That acts like he is a real human. Here is my story.

One nice calm after noon with the yellow red and orange sun fading down there were black and white birds with stick legs and long necks and  black round eyes were flying past with white bags hooked onto their long yellow beak heading to the city.

One of the birds dived down and put the white bag on the window sill and unwrapped it the lady’s new baby was here and other one delivered a bag with kittens in it and another one delivered a puppy. All the birds have delivered the stuff they went up high in the sky and went to some fluffy clouds but they weren't just any clouds they were fluffy giants!.

The birds landed on the clouds the giant were on after all that a bird that was gray and looked like he just got shot with white thunder. He landed on a gray cloud that was sad when the giant saw sight of the bird and got happy and squeezed the life out of him the gray bird and then made something what he made was a dark green chomping crocodile then wrapped the dark green saw sight of the bird and got happy and squeezed the life out of him the gray bird and then made something what he made was a dark green chomping crocodile then wrapped the dark green crocodile and gave it to the bird the bird looked anxious to grab hold of it.

But he knew he has to do it he Tartuffe up and took it out of it hands and took a deep breath in but the crocodile bit the bird in the head! The bird yelled ‘’OUCH!’’ And flew away mean while he was doing that task the gray cloud looked around and saw all the other white clouds having fun with their birds and making cute things. The gray cloud said .sigh.

The gray bird came back with feathers falling of his gray body the gray cloud picked them up and put them on his head but they fell off. He looked up and saw a white cloud and flew up there the gray clouds heart had just shattered into a million pieces he looked up and saw the white cloud giving the gray bird a white bag. The gray cloud got so mad that he turd to black and white thunder came out then he stopped and cried it was raining under him suddenly the bird came back the cloud stopped but he was sniffing the bird unwrapped the white bag and put on a rugby helmet and a rugby chest plate on the cloud smiled and squeezed the life out  of him.

The Pit Story

W.A.L.T:

I know I will be successful when I can…..

• Write in correct sentences.
• Use paragraphs correctly
• Use adjectives

I made my hands get gripped to the top of the slide. I wonder what would be down there and if I would fall into a pit that goes all the way down into the concrete. I was terrified at first, then I let go of the silky slide.

I held my breath and went down the bone-chilling slide. I thought “I should of stopped by now” “AHHHHHHHHHHH.” After 10 seconds of falling I hit the balls that were in the dark and spooky hole.

I landed on my face, I stood up and touched my soft cheek. I felt my left cheek then my right cheek. On my right cheek there was something weird on it felt like a hard candy. I looked at my cheek. “YUK, GET OFF” I yelled. I put the hard candy in my pocket.

I started to climb. I jumped to another pit, I stopped. There was a plaster sitting at the top of the next soft ball that I was going to grab. It started to fall, it fell on my face. I tried to blow it off but it did not work so I let go off the balls and wiped it off of me. After that I had realized that it was a bad Idea. I had realized that something had saved me. It was the hard candy. I had got it out off my pocket and stuck it into the balls.

I started to climb again. I reached the top and smiled. I still had the hard candy and I did not know what to do with it, so I looked at it. It had some old food on it and a hair that looked like a baby's hair. But guess what I ate it anyway.

Slime

My class is having a marble day. Are marble day is something that our whole class gets to do. We have to try and get 100 marbles in a jar. To get marbles we have to Sit up nicely, Respect each other, Respect the environment and be on the right place at the right time.

In my group there is Brooke, Ryleigh, Sharney and I. The recipe we are doing is fluffy slime.

My Maths D.L.O

W.A.L.T...  Add fractions using multiplication. This week my class has been learning how to add fractions. I have made a D.L.O to help you adding fractions   

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My Love Story

W.A.L.T

I know I will be successful when …

• Re-call what is happening in the video.
• Use adjectives and experiment with language features.
• Use paragraphs correctly.
• Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence starters.

I sat at the brown soft piano as my fingers took control of all the memories that I was felling. It was a very emotional time. I was shivering like a leaf as I crumbled. I was broken.

I was playing notes of memories that me and my wife use to play before she past away. She couldn’t be saved she had a terrible tumor cancer there was no cure for a women her age, I was broken with nothing. Then I heard the lovely very beautiful notes of my wife playing the piano. Jenny grabbed my hand and started to play a note with me. My love that was shredded like paper, she kissed me and left like there was nothing more to see.

After that another memories floated by and made my shaking fingers change the tune. I remembered another memory as my eyes started to water. It was my brother he was in war. He looked at me with a big tear, he walked out of the crumbling trench and tried to shot the other group with a shot like lightning, but he got shot in a flash. I felt scared because 2 of my loved ones are gone.

I was scrambled. Then I remembered that I had a wonderful son, his name is Jeremiah. I remembered that I had brought a toy horse for him on his birthday. He loved it his dreams had come true. He put the silky horse down and sat on the warm chair. He finished my sad song with a lovely note, and smiled at me.

My Production

This term we have been focusing on New Zealand Music Month. We have been practicing for week so that we could get it perfect. We had to perform it on the 30th of August & 31st of August,  I felt nervous because there was going to be about 340 people there. Last night we had our first performance and we are having another performance tonight.

We had to try and think of song from before 2001 that are made by New Zealand Artist's. I did Slice Of Heaven by Dave Dobbyn. In my group there was Brooke, Shanarnia, Dominique, Mikayla, Jasper, Sam, Sage, Corbyn and I.

I was in 6 roles, I had to do choir, Maui And His Three Brothers, Ukulele, Slice Of Haven, Kapa Haka and Why doe's love do this to me? 

The other classes were doing trash to fash, TV started mashed together, Shadow 

puppet's, 

Here The Song: Slice Of Haven