The Cloud Story

W.A.L.T to describe using our senses.

I know I will be successful when I describe what I ..

• See
• Hear
• Feel
• Taste
• Smell

It was a sunny day with the sun shining on the sea there was a friendly cloud. But it was no ordinary friendly  cloud, it was a cloud with it own path. Not the wind blowing it, it was himself taking him into different places. Then he saw himself in a  reflecting  it was like he was delighted to see himself again. I followed him till he got to the traffic light’s. He went to the traffic light and started changing colors like the colors of the traffic light’s.

He was turning green, orange and red it was like he was like it was magical. So I told my mum she thought it was just using my imagination but I think it was not my imagination. So I show all my friends but there mum says the same things.

But then one day the cloud came to my window I told my mum. We both rush back up to my room “See mum I told you there was a cloud.” Suddenly the cloud see some trouble so he race down to where the fire was like a car going full speed. The fire was like red on the sun. So the cloud went down and started to rain water on the fire it was like the cloud was being helpful and caring to help the beautiful environment. I went to him and asked if he could be my friend.

The cloud flew passed my bedroom window like a paper plane. “Hello cloud.”

He mumbles back to me, ”Hello.”

After he had helped my town he went back to his home.  I am going to miss that cloud.

The Day I Went To War

W.A.L.T to describe using our senses.

I know I will be successful when I describe what I ..

• See
• Hear
• Feel
• Taste
• Smell

Last year I made a story for ANZAC day, but I didn't get to publish it so I am publishing it so use can all see it. Here is my story. Please don't forget to leave a Helpful, Positive and Thoughtful comment, Bye!

It was one terrifying day at war, on the 10th of December 1975. “Get ready men. Are you ready for war.” “yes sir” Yelled all the soldiers. So they got off the plane and started running for their lives and their country. I could see some terrifying stuff in the army, people getting shot, notes in the sky, smoke from the tanks, dust and explosions.

I can hear scary, spooky and killing sounds like people fuling to the ground, and soldiers stepping in puddles and soldiers yelling “help help.” Then I could see my big brother Taisyn he was 28 before he went to war. We surprise him with a  birthday every single year because His friend and him were the only ones that survived the war. When the war had finished I smelt Smoke, dried blood and freedom. I smelt freedom because there was 2 of as who survived.

I feel sad, scared and  terrified. My family got killed thats when I became strong and survived the war. When  the war was over the soldiers got back on the plane and went back home. I was glad that I survived war because I mest my family and I wanted to see them it was the day of my birthday the day I came back so they put a birthday party for me.

It was my 29th birthday today in 1940 the 11 of october.

I told my family about the war. They were glad that I was still alive.

THE END

My Tongan Diorama!

This term we have been building Diorama's. We are building Diorama's because we were going to show what a Cyclone would do to it. The teacher that has been helping us with our Diorama's is Miss Wilson. Next term we will be doing a presentation about cyclones and what they do.

We have made ours with cotton wool, clay, card and coloured paper. My partners were Risha and Tilsa, they helped me do the trees and building it.

Here is our Diorama

I feel proud for my partners and me. We worked really hard on this to get it done. Please don't forget to comment. Bye!

Standard Written Form!

W.A.L.T How To Use And Adding And Subtracting  Using Standard Written Form
In my maths I have learnt how to use standard written form. I have made a video so that people can learn from it so they know how to do Standard Written Form. I think that Standard Written Form is easier.  Please don't forget to leave feed back, Thanks Bye!

DNA IS AWESOME!

W.A.L.T summarise and retell  the main ideas and important information from what I have read in my own words

This year I have been looking at DNA for my reading. I have looked at books that have information on how to tell you how you can show your DNA. Some of the facts I have learnt is that  you can get  DNA  from your saliva. The police put a swab in your mouth to get your saliva. 

Did you know that  police use dust powder to get finger prints of things that have been used in a crime scene. They use dust powder to get the finger print and the particels of so they can Identify who and what they did. 

Here is some information about my finger prints.