W.A.L.T to describe using our senses.
I know I will be successful when I describe what I ..
- See
- Hear
- Feel
- Taste
- Smell
It was a sunny day with the sun shining on the sea there was a friendly cloud. But it was no ordinary friendly cloud, it was a cloud with it own path. Not the wind blowing it, it was himself taking him into different places. Then he saw himself in a reflecting it was like he was delighted to see himself again. I followed him till he got to the traffic light’s. He went to the traffic light and started changing colors like the colors of the traffic light’s.
He was turning green, orange and red it was like he was like it was magical. So I told my mum she thought it was just using my imagination but I think it was not my imagination. So I show all my friends but there mum says the same things.
But then one day the cloud came to my window I told my mum. We both rush back up to my room “See mum I told you there was a cloud.” Suddenly the cloud see some trouble so he race down to where the fire was like a car going full speed. The fire was like red on the sun. So the cloud went down and started to rain water on the fire it was like the cloud was being helpful and caring to help the beautiful environment. I went to him and asked if he could be my friend.
The cloud flew passed my bedroom window like a paper plane. “Hello cloud.”
He mumbles back to me, ”Hello.”
After he had helped my town he went back to his home. I am going to miss that cloud.
good job tasharn you did so will and it was an amazing story you shroud do more story like this and thank you for posting this good job keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteThank you Jessica,
ReplyDeleteI appreciate this blog comment.But next time you write a blog post you should check the capitail letters in peoples names and the start of a scentence.
Thank you for this comment Jessica.