The Pit Story

W.A.L.T:

I know I will be successful when I can…..

• Write in correct sentences.
• Use paragraphs correctly
• Use adjectives

I made my hands get gripped to the top of the slide. I wonder what would be down there and if I would fall into a pit that goes all the way down into the concrete. I was terrified at first, then I let go of the silky slide.

I held my breath and went down the bone-chilling slide. I thought “I should of stopped by now” “AHHHHHHHHHHH.” After 10 seconds of falling I hit the balls that were in the dark and spooky hole.

I landed on my face, I stood up and touched my soft cheek. I felt my left cheek then my right cheek. On my right cheek there was something weird on it felt like a hard candy. I looked at my cheek. “YUK, GET OFF” I yelled. I put the hard candy in my pocket.

I started to climb. I jumped to another pit, I stopped. There was a plaster sitting at the top of the next soft ball that I was going to grab. It started to fall, it fell on my face. I tried to blow it off but it did not work so I let go off the balls and wiped it off of me. After that I had realized that it was a bad Idea. I had realized that something had saved me. It was the hard candy. I had got it out off my pocket and stuck it into the balls.

I started to climb again. I reached the top and smiled. I still had the hard candy and I did not know what to do with it, so I looked at it. It had some old food on it and a hair that looked like a baby's hair. But guess what I ate it anyway.