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Friday, September 22, 2017

Partly Cloudy

This week we have been working on a story about a cloud. That acts like he is a real human. Here is my story.

One nice calm after noon with the yellow red and orange sun fading down there were black and white birds with stick legs and long necks and  black round eyes were flying past with white bags hooked onto their long yellow beak heading to the city.

One of the birds dived down and put the white bag on the window sill and unwrapped it the lady’s new baby was here and other one delivered a bag with kittens in it and another one delivered a puppy. All the birds have delivered the stuff they went up high in the sky and went to some fluffy clouds but they weren't just any clouds they were fluffy giants!.

The birds landed on the clouds the giant were on after all that a bird that was gray and looked like he just got shot with white thunder. He landed on a gray cloud that was sad when the giant saw sight of the bird and got happy and squeezed the life out of him the gray bird and then made something what he made was a dark green chomping crocodile then wrapped the dark green saw sight of the bird and got happy and squeezed the life out of him the gray bird and then made something what he made was a dark green chomping crocodile then wrapped the dark green crocodile and gave it to the bird the bird looked anxious to grab hold of it.

But he knew he has to do it he Tartuffe up and took it out of it hands and took a deep breath in but the crocodile bit the bird in the head! The bird yelled ‘’OUCH!’’ And flew away mean while he was doing that task the gray cloud looked around and saw all the other white clouds having fun with their birds and making cute things. The gray cloud said .sigh.


The gray bird came back with feathers falling of his gray body the gray cloud picked them up and put them on his head but they fell off. He looked up and saw a white cloud and flew up there the gray clouds heart had just shattered into a million pieces he looked up and saw the white cloud giving the gray bird a white bag. The gray cloud got so mad that he turd to black and white thunder came out then he stopped and cried it was raining under him suddenly the bird came back the cloud stopped but he was sniffing the bird unwrapped the white bag and put on a rugby helmet and a rugby chest plate on the cloud smiled and squeezed the life out  of him.

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