My Love Story

W.A.L.T

I know I will be successful when …

• Re-call what is happening in the video.
• Use adjectives and experiment with language features.
• Use paragraphs correctly.
• Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence starters.

I sat at the brown soft piano as my fingers took control of all the memories that I was felling. It was a very emotional time. I was shivering like a leaf as I crumbled. I was broken.

I was playing notes of memories that me and my wife use to play before she past away. She couldn’t be saved she had a terrible tumor cancer there was no cure for a women her age, I was broken with nothing. Then I heard the lovely very beautiful notes of my wife playing the piano. Jenny grabbed my hand and started to play a note with me. My love that was shredded like paper, she kissed me and left like there was nothing more to see.

After that another memories floated by and made my shaking fingers change the tune. I remembered another memory as my eyes started to water. It was my brother he was in war. He looked at me with a big tear, he walked out of the crumbling trench and tried to shot the other group with a shot like lightning, but he got shot in a flash. I felt scared because 2 of my loved ones are gone.

I was scrambled. Then I remembered that I had a wonderful son, his name is Jeremiah. I remembered that I had brought a toy horse for him on his birthday. He loved it his dreams had come true. He put the silky horse down and sat on the warm chair. He finished my sad song with a lovely note, and smiled at me.