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Monday, April 8, 2019

Hurumanu Music 😃😃😃

Kia Ora, welcome back to my blog. Today we had Hurumanu Music. We have to for our second person we had to watch a music video called Happier by Marshmello ft Bastille. For our task we have to write a story about it in either the dog life our the girls life. I have chosen to do it about the girls life.  Here is the video it is based on.



It was my Tenth birthday and it was a catastrophy everyone was going crazy the day so far was terrible.   My dad then brought out my cake for my birthday, it was so big and had lots of candles on it. I took a big breath and then my other friend came over and blew out my candles! After that I felt a tear drop on my face and  I knew that I was miserable. My dad then gave me my present. I didn't feel like opening it but I still did. I opened it and there was a bow, I looked at my dad all confused because the bow was to small for me. He then brought in a puppy and my face lit up with joy!

Everyday my dad measured my height  on the wall as well as my puppy Mello.

As she grew older with me her toys and beds got bigger. My dad and I bought Mello some bigger toys and a bigger bed. 
As I grew older and I was in High School my dad measured me again. The next day I went to school and had Football. 2 girls from my team got to choose who was in their teams. Once all the girls were chosen I was the last one and I didn't get picked. I got home and started to practise my skills with Mello. 

The next day when I went to school I had a photo with my Football Team. 2 girls from my team came and took my spot in the photo, after that I went to the back of the team. The photographer told me to smile and get in closer. I smiled and the whole team laughed and started making fun of me and my braces. I ran home as fast as I could. When I got home I laid down on my bed and Mello banged on the door. I opened the door and let Mello in. I smiled and covered my mouth, Mello placed her paw on my hand and pulled my hand down. 

I stood up with her toy and then she laid down I knew 
something was wrong. I pat her and then gave her some of her medicine. As months went on she got worse I walked into the house and found her laying down on the floor I went to her and then called my dad in worry. We took Mello to the vet then my dad talked to the vet. My dad then came into to tell me the bad news, I patted her and grabbed her bow to remember her. I waved goodbye. 

20 years later it was my daughters birthday. The same thing happened to her. Her party was the same and then my dad brought in her present and it was a red bow. She looked confused just like me. My dad then brought in a Puppy. She put her red bow onto her dog. I then felt a tear. My dad took a photo of her and placed it by mine.


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1 comment:

  1. Great job on this creative writing, Tasharn! I really enjoyed being able to read the finished product on your blog. A suggestion for next time would be to proof read and make sure that all of your punctuation is in the right place. There are some places that could have used a comma to connect your ideas!

    Overall I am very pleased with this piece of writing. Keep up the great work.
    - Miss Birtch

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