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Friday, May 31, 2019

Garage Band Story

Kia Ora, and welcome back to my blog. Today I. will be shearing my creative writing about my Garage Band song. For this activity we had to make up a story about a our song.We had to make up a place or were we would be in the song when we listen to it.

Here is my story:..

Music Story-Garage Band
LO: Create a piece of writing that describe a place or settings by your song.

It was a great untroubled day that me and my friends decided to make a piece of music in our music studio.Today we really want to blow the minds of all our fans that listen to our music.

I stood there in the desert wanting something to do but then I realised that good things will happen if I just believe. I start walking thru the desert and came across a village. I walk thru and see lots of lovely people. They all wave at each other and are always smiling. That day they let me join the village.
THE END  

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tasharn it's Tahnesha, I like the way you added your LO and why you were doing it, and I don't think you neeed to change anything.

    Thanks Tahnesha

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