The Pit Story

W.A.L.T:

I know I will be successful when I can…..

• Write in correct sentences.
• Use paragraphs correctly
• Use adjectives

I made my hands get gripped to the top of the slide. I wonder what would be down there and if I would fall into a pit that goes all the way down into the concrete. I was terrified at first, then I let go of the silky slide.

I held my breath and went down the bone-chilling slide. I thought “I should of stopped by now” “AHHHHHHHHHHH.” After 10 seconds of falling I hit the balls that were in the dark and spooky hole.

I landed on my face, I stood up and touched my soft cheek. I felt my left cheek then my right cheek. On my right cheek there was something weird on it felt like a hard candy. I looked at my cheek. “YUK, GET OFF” I yelled. I put the hard candy in my pocket.

I started to climb. I jumped to another pit, I stopped. There was a plaster sitting at the top of the next soft ball that I was going to grab. It started to fall, it fell on my face. I tried to blow it off but it did not work so I let go off the balls and wiped it off of me. After that I had realized that it was a bad Idea. I had realized that something had saved me. It was the hard candy. I had got it out off my pocket and stuck it into the balls.

I started to climb again. I reached the top and smiled. I still had the hard candy and I did not know what to do with it, so I looked at it. It had some old food on it and a hair that looked like a baby's hair. But guess what I ate it anyway.

Slime

My class is having a marble day. Are marble day is something that our whole class gets to do. We have to try and get 100 marbles in a jar. To get marbles we have to Sit up nicely, Respect each other, Respect the environment and be on the right place at the right time.

In my group there is Brooke, Ryleigh, Sharney and I. The recipe we are doing is fluffy slime.

My Maths D.L.O

W.A.L.T...  Add fractions using multiplication. This week my class has been learning how to add fractions. I have made a D.L.O to help you adding fractions   

Hope you like my video and make sure you comment.

My Love Story

W.A.L.T

I know I will be successful when …

• Re-call what is happening in the video.
• Use adjectives and experiment with language features.
• Use paragraphs correctly.
• Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence starters.

I sat at the brown soft piano as my fingers took control of all the memories that I was felling. It was a very emotional time. I was shivering like a leaf as I crumbled. I was broken.

I was playing notes of memories that me and my wife use to play before she past away. She couldn’t be saved she had a terrible tumor cancer there was no cure for a women her age, I was broken with nothing. Then I heard the lovely very beautiful notes of my wife playing the piano. Jenny grabbed my hand and started to play a note with me. My love that was shredded like paper, she kissed me and left like there was nothing more to see.

After that another memories floated by and made my shaking fingers change the tune. I remembered another memory as my eyes started to water. It was my brother he was in war. He looked at me with a big tear, he walked out of the crumbling trench and tried to shot the other group with a shot like lightning, but he got shot in a flash. I felt scared because 2 of my loved ones are gone.

I was scrambled. Then I remembered that I had a wonderful son, his name is Jeremiah. I remembered that I had brought a toy horse for him on his birthday. He loved it his dreams had come true. He put the silky horse down and sat on the warm chair. He finished my sad song with a lovely note, and smiled at me.

My Production

This term we have been focusing on New Zealand Music Month. We have been practicing for week so that we could get it perfect. We had to perform it on the 30th of August & 31st of August,  I felt nervous because there was going to be about 340 people there. Last night we had our first performance and we are having another performance tonight.

We had to try and think of song from before 2001 that are made by New Zealand Artist's. I did Slice Of Heaven by Dave Dobbyn. In my group there was Brooke, Shanarnia, Dominique, Mikayla, Jasper, Sam, Sage, Corbyn and I.

I was in 6 roles, I had to do choir, Maui And His Three Brothers, Ukulele, Slice Of Haven, Kapa Haka and Why doe's love do this to me? 

The other classes were doing trash to fash, TV started mashed together, Shadow 

puppet's, 

Here The Song: Slice Of Haven 

My Somalia Story

W.A.L.T...write a narrative through the eyes of one of the crew, or robots or the pirates.

This week we have been writing about Somalia and if we were the captain on the ship or the captain on the ship a crew I chose to be the captain.

It was one sunny day on the shimmering water of Somalia. It was nice and peaceful day until some pirates from another ship came along.

Then my personal assistant heard something that sounded like foot step.

“WHAT WAS THAT!”

“It is the other pirates.”

Nobody knew about it until the pirates went into the kitchen, into the bottom of the ship, and the other captain from the other ship came to me and said

“ Do you know how I am.”

“Who.”

“The new captain!”

Then the crew from the other ship came down to these containers. After that they saw something it looked like robots. The robots helped me. They chucked them over board. One of them said”BOO” and that scared half of them away. Once they had scared all of them away they went back into the container and always keeps them safe

TO BE CONTINUED

My Fraction Slide Week One

W.A.L.T.. To add Fractions
This week my math class has been looking at fraction and how to add and organize them into biggest to smallest and smallest to biggest. This is my slide I had to try and think which is bigger and which is smaller. Then we had to add fractions like 1/2+1/2 that equals 1 hole if you did not know already.

Heres my slide!